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FIC REC: More Than Memories (Ron/Hermione) NC17 by BlueRain

Fic: More than Memories
Author: BlueRain
Status: WIP - 22 chapters.
Rating: NC17 for sure!
Location: The restricted section at Simply Undeniable
Pairing: Ron/Hermione, mentions of Ginny/Harry.

Summary: A night that starts out inflicting the pain and horror of war ends in a way Ron had never expected. A story of love that stands the test of time, and of a passion undeniable, even in the face of heart-wrenching betrayal.


Why It's Good: It's incredibly well written and the connection that exists between Hermione and Ron is so real, without being cheesy and melodramatic. It doesn't have the characters incessently make mention of the connection that's between them--like some other fics that I've read, opting instead to powerfully illustrate it. The Ginny/Harry relationship is far from perfect, which is what makes it so great. It isn't marriage and babies and Noble!Harry. It's different from a lot of adult Harry/Ginny relationships that I've read.

Complaints: The only negative that I can find with it is the portrayal of two year old Philip. I don't find it to be very consistent. At times he seems only capable of shouting one word, and other times he speaks in almost full sentences. He could be more fleshed out, as a character. He could say things that two year olds say, instead of just shouting, "Play!" Though, children, toddlers, and babies ARE hard to write so I can't complain too much. ;)

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